After a couple of days without a post, I decided that my next post should be about a creepypasta. Not just any one though, I’m going to give my full opinion on one of the most popular creepypasta: Jeff The Killer. Now when I say popular I mean people have created various sequels, and even some pretty good fan art to boot. But does this killer really live up to the hype?
For starters, let me give you a summary of the story.
A boy named Jeff has recently moved to a new town with his parents and his brother Liu. Shortly after moving in, their neighbor invites them to a birthday party to which Jeff’s mother immediately agrees to go to despite Jeff’s clear unwillingness. We’re then introduced to what the author simply describes as a “strange feeling.” However Jeff ignores this “feeling” and proceeds to go the bus stop where both he and his brother are bullied by a couple of punks. After being teased, Jeff charges at the bullies resulting in one of them being stabbed in the shoulder and the others being knocked out. After school Jeff and his brother are questioned by the police and Liu is taken to Juvy despite the obvious fact that it’s all just an act to keep Jeff from going. The following day Jeff goes to the party and is once again confronted by the group of bullies from the bus scene (what they’re doing at the party is beyond me). At this point, Jeff’s had enough, killing 2 of the bullies and leaving one unconscious. The fight leaves Jeff physically scarred and his sanity gone. The story thus ends with Jeff killing everyone in his family, even his brother Liu.
Sounds pretty good right? Well… no This story is littered with terrible grammar and run-ons that ruin the story. Not only that but couldn’t they have used a little more vocabulary when describing Jeff? Why’s it always ominous? Seriously, why not use words like sadistic, psychotic, terrifying, or even EVIL?? Besides that, some things in this story are just unheard of. Killing a guy from just punching him? Not gonna happen. Also towards the end of the story Jeff is lit on fire (his face more specifically) and somehow manages to survive this. To top this all off he’s taken in by his family even though he’s clearly insane and believe me it’s pretty obvious. His mom even asks and I quote “Doctor, Is my son… alright, you know. In the head?” Unbelievable.
Now, I’ll be honest this is nonetheless a very good idea, but its execution is just terrible and if you ask me it has earned the right to be featured on a troll site.
Well, that’s all for now guys. Hope you guys enjoyed and if you want to read the story for yourself you can read it here
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Yeah I went there.